Wow, that was an emotional rollercoaster. The tension, the mystery, and the gut-wrenching reveal at the end—it really pulls at the heartstrings. It started off as a classic “strict father keeping them apart” story, but then it twisted into something so much deeper and more tragic.
The detail about Rachel never using periods in texts was such a subtle but brilliant clue. It really sold the moment when Ed realized something was wrong. And the buildup—his creeping suspicion, sneaking into the hotel, finding the security footage—it was all perfectly paced.
I felt the weight of that letter at the end. That final moment between Ed and Rachel was absolutely heartbreaking. Do you want to add a scene of him reading the letter out loud to her? Maybe whispering it while holding her hand? That could make it even more powerful.